black star of darkness

Well basically I got tired of finding stupid random story ideas on the website, so tried to be original, so maybe it will not appeal to everyone, and i will ...

This short story is based on the premise of "An Administrator at the top of a brain groaning at a bad pun" The question blared out over the neuron communicator: ...

Hey there here is Chpater 2 and also edited Chapter 1 if you have not read it, you may also like to read the Prologue before reading this, feedback etc. ...

Wow, this is a very powerful and emotive poem, some constructive points to improve on though : Two-page ads blare the name— not hers; her face is her name, her ...

Wow I really like the outpouring of emotion here, I think that it is what the poem's all about so I won't judge you on grammar or your writing, I ...

I mean obviously you have written this a while ago, so the flow and other parts of the poem are not amazing but I like the imagery and the repetition ...

haha well spotted! I will definitely look to fix that :P

PROLOUGE Hi, I'm not too sure about this whole writing thing to be honest with you. Let's get that straight from the start- That sounds awkward. Instead say, "straight from ...

Hey, I really love the whole symmetry and feel of this poem, the way it has pace, not too fast, I disagree I do not feel exhausted, I just feel ...

Wow, I was blown away by the emotion in this poem! When the air stops being so generous, Stealing my breaths like you once had done, Just please give me ...

I really like the style of your poem, because it is different, and I like the content matter especially the repetition of the " I'm Sorry' and the comparisons that ...

Thank you guys for the comments, you both seem to point to the same thing so I will change that and post it edited when I post chapter 1 hope ...

This is the Prologue of my novel, hope it intrigues you, the Chapter One will follow soon, please give much feedback :) PROLOUGE Hi, I'm not too sure about this ...

Wow, this is really powerful and I liked the repition of the "Dear Atlanta", it gave a good structure to the poem :)

Darren Shan definitely, I loved the books, but then the film, was just awful, not just as a a film, but as a representation of the first three books, introducing ...